I was a pupil at Marshland School and this blog is where I shared my learning. This blog has been archived, no further content will be uploaded or added. You are welcome to continue viewing posts, however commenting has been disabled.
Friday, July 5, 2019
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Enthralling story Hamish, I can't wait to find out how what happens to Xalvador. Will he find the Mage? Will he fight the champion?
ReplyDeleteGood story I will read the next one
ReplyDeleteHi Hamish,
ReplyDeleteIts Ethan. Your story is really cool I like the first two or three sentences. This week in class we have been learning about Narratives to they are really fun and easy to learn to.
What was the most interesting part about Narratives?
I like the rising action in a novel.
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