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Thursday, February 27, 2020

This is just to say

Hello bloggers! today we have a  poem by William Carlos William. I made a parody of this.

I have eaten
the plums
that was in
the icebox


and which
you were
probably
saving
for breakfast


forgive me
they were
delicious
so sweet
and so cold



and this is my parody of it.

This is just to say
By Hamish Kelly
I have taken
The dusty bike
That was in the garage


And which
You were
Probably
Saving for 
A ride
Forgive me
It was
Waiting for me
So sleek

And so fun


By

2 comments:

  1. David KellyFebruary 28, 2020 at 9:20 AM

    Love this Hamish - I can just imagine you hopping on that sleek dusty bike for a quick ride! Fantastic.

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  2. Jenny KellyMarch 25, 2020 at 5:28 PM

    Ha! fantastic, I imagine the dust blowing off it as you speed along! Also how funny, there are a few dusty bikes in our garage right now!

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