One day, a day I wIll not forget, I was goIng to have my bIrthday party, but Instead got a nasty surprIse.
I woke up, and I was super excIted! It was my bIrthday. I was goIng to have a blast today. I had chocolate spread on toast for breakfast and I got some cool gIfts, lIke some rIg 300 headphones, and some lego and clothes.
The day was goIng great when I had a weird paIn In my stomach. It got so bad I couldn't get out of bed, and I was groanIng. We had to postpone my party, and I was crushed. My dad drove me to the 24 hour surgery, and the doctors told hIm I needed to go to the hospital, sInce my appendIx was Inflamed. There was a lot of throwIng up and feelIng sleepy, It’s If someone put a sleepIng pIll InsIde dog poo and forced me to eat It.
There were plenty of days where I was just sleepIng. I was In a lot of plaIn and dIdn't want to do anythIng other than sleep. But fInally, after three days of waItIng, I got my appendIx removed In a surgery. Then I was allowed out, but It stIll hurt lIke hell, sInce the 3 holes they cut open my stomach were not fully healed. But I had my party agaIn when I recovered. More of a serIes of days I couldn't get the hang of, but It was maInly the fIrst day.
HI Hamish, I would love to read this but it is formatted so that it does not all sit on the page - do you think you could edit it so that it fits on your blog? Mrs O
ReplyDeleteYes. I'll try to fix it, it does this for no reason. thanks for the feedback.
ReplyDeleteSorry about the capital i's too. someone changed it withoutmy permission and it's a pain to change back al the i's.
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