Friday, June 12, 2020
New Revised Comic!
Hey Bloggers! Today I and Blake remade our ironic comic. it's much better now, it has more slides, and it's properly ironic. Blake is throwing a water balloon at fletcher, while fletcher is running away, and fletcher thinks "I should jump in the pool so I don't get soaked by the water balloon!" The irony is that he's running away from something that will get him wet, but then he falls into a pool which soaks him. I hope you like it and comment down below on what I could improve on!
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Hi Hamish, I really like your editing with the image of the person, getting it into the background of the image, also the outstanding cropping that you did for the people, which look perfect! Your Irony (in my opinon) is Dramatic. Next time you could make some speech bubbles, putting some talking that could make it more funny!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback luke! All the cropping goes to blake. :)
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